HomeMy WebLinkAboutThe Citizen, 1994-12-07, Page 5THE CITIZEN, WEDNESDAY, DECEMBER 7, 1994. PAGE 5.
Arthur Black
I didn’t write
the headline
So what do you think of that headline?
Good? Bad? Ho-hum? Well, don't blame me
- I didn't write it.
. Headlines are an interesting phenomenon.
Imagine you were handed a story of say 750
- 1,000 words by an editor with a cigar butt
stuck in his beak, who removed the cigar just
long enough to growl "Here, punk - put a
headline on this".
You know that you've got four, five,
maybe half a dozen words to sum up the
story. What do you write?
If you're like most headline writers,
nothing very interesting. New Republic
magazine recently asked its readers to
submit their idea of the most boring
headlines they'd seen.
The magazine was inundated.
NEW ZEALAND: LABORATORY FOR
AIR TRANSPORT DEVELOPMENT
read one entry.
ASTRONAUT GETS DEAD NEWT
OUT OF TANK
was another. The Charleston Gazette
submitted
TOURIST BUREAUS MAY
CONSOLIDATE, BUT NOT RIGHT NOW
This was challenged by an offering from an
Atlanta paper:
LOCAL EARTHQUAKES
RARELY NOTICED
International Scene
Laos —
almost forgotten
One of the things I almost did was get sent
off to Indochina. I was working for External
Affairs at the time and the rule was that most
single Foreign Service Officers were packed
off to Indochina for a year to serve with the
Canadian contingent of the then current
truce commission. If I remember correctly,
the other two members were India and
Poland.
As I read up on the situation, it appeared
to be a first-class example of a lesson in
frustration because, even if the Canadians
did find some example of military
equipment being slipped across the border,
by the time something was done about it, the
equipment was long gone. In addition, it just
taught the Chinese or whoever was doing the
sneaking to look for another way where
there was no inquiring Canadian to foil the
plans.
At any rate my trip never materialized
since I conveniently came down with a
recurrence of my jaundice which I had first
contracted while living in Spain. Given the
number of diseases which you could contract
in Vietnam, you had to go out completely
healthy and that I was, at the time, most
assuredly not. The department found
something else for me to do. I ended up in
Vienna working with the Hungarian refugees
fleeing their country in the wake of the 1956
uprising.
But I would like to return to the subject of
Vietnam. For those readers whose
geography of the area is not particularly
good, and I suspect there are a lot of them,
the old French colony of Indo-China, located
south of China and east of Thailand, was
made up of three parts, each with its own
The New Haven Register weighed in with
STATE MAY ALLOW DRIVERS TO
PUT STICKER IN WINDOW
- while the New York Times alerted its
readers that
PROFESSORS IN 14-NATION STUDY
SAY THEIR IDEAS ARE IGNORED
Chicago readers of the Daily Southtown
were no doubt paralyzed to leam that
O.J. CASE HINGES ON EVIDENCE
Interestingly enough, Canadian entries made
up a fair proportion of the submissions.
MANY IGNORE CANADA'S DAY OF
INDEPENDENCE
lamented the Sun-Sentinel, while the Seattle
Post-Intelligencer harrumphed
CANADIAN WHEAT BLAMED
Canada's own Globe and Mail - the
newspaper that is pleased to pronounce itself
Canada's 'national' newspaper, hastened to
inform the world at large:
CANADIANS CONTENT,
SURVEY FINDS
I wish the New Republic survey had
acknowledged other headline categories -
cleverest headline for example. I've always
admired the show business paper Variety for
the shrewd conciseness of its headlines.
Once when a blizzard paralyzed Buffalo and
would-be theatre-goers, Variety summed up
the situation with
BLIZ BOFFS BUFF BIZ
Another time, when surveys indicated that
rural audiences did not flock to movies
whose themes were rural or agricultural,
Variety boiled it down to this headline:
By Raymond Canon
language and culture.
While Vietnam, and to a lesser extent
Cambodia, finds its way into the news now
and again, the third part of Indo-China,
known as Laos, is hardly ever heard from.
Laos played very little role in the long
civil war in Vietnam, a war that many
Americans would like to forget; it did not
stop the North Vietnamese from using part
of the country as a supply line to the south,
nor did the Americans have any qualms
about flying over it. When the war ended the
Laotians would have liked very much to
withdraw into their own little world without
any interference from anybody but this was
not to be. The 4.4 million Laotians found
themselves on the receiving end of no less
than thousands of Russian economic
advisors, not to mention about 50,000
Vietnamese troops.
Given that Laos has very little in the way
of military forces, there seemed to be little
reason to keep such a large force there; as a
result the Vietnamese left, followed at the
same time by the Russians in the wake of the
collapse of the Soviet Union. The collective
sigh of relief on the part of the Laotians
could be heard all over southeast Asia.
However, the country is moving only with
a minimum of speed to a market economy.
Projects get approved only to gather dust in
some bureaucrat's office.
Perhaps the most noticeable sign of
progress is the recently completed
"Friendship Bridge" (over the Mekong
River) between Thailand and Laos. The road
in Thailand to the bridge is in good shape
but that is more than can be said for the part
of Laos between the bridge and Vientiane,
the Laotian capital 20 kilometers away. Any
tourists who get as far as the bridge, have to
leave their comfortable buses and take an
antiquated vehicle to the capital.
Even trucks carrying merchandise have to
STIX NIX HIX PIX
Remember when Washington announced it
would no longer bail out New York city
financially? The New York Post summed up
the situation pithily with the headline:
FEDS TO NEW YORK: DROP DEAD
There are a lot of headline categories New
Republic could have honoured - how about
"Most Unintentionally Hilarious Headline"?
There's a paper bagful of entries in this
department - how about
FATHER OF NINE FINED $100 FOR
FAILURE TO STOP
or this headline in the New York Herald:
DEAD POLICEMAN ON FORCE 23 YEARS
The Baltimore editor that OK'd this headline
may never live it down:
FLORIST ASKS GIRLS TO DROP
STRAPLESS GOWNS
And how would you like to be an editor on
the San Francisco newspaper that ran this
headline:
ESCAPED LEOPARD
BELIEVED SPOTTED
Dullest headline? Well, according to the
arbiters of the New Republic contest, the
honour goes to the editorial department of
the Huntsville Alabama Courier which ran a
story under this flag:
LOCAL WOMAN, 82,
CLEANS OUT DESK
Personally, I can think of a half dozen
stories that bubble up from six poignant
words like that.
But then, I don't write headlines for a
living.
unload on the Laotian side so that it can
either be stored in a warehouse or carted off
to the capital in an equally antiquated truck.
Nor is the government in a hurry to do
business with Thailand which looks
longingly at the country's plentiful natural
resources. In order to prevent the Thais from
getting too firm a hold on the Laotian
economy, the government is encouraging
investment from elsewhere, even Canada,
should any Canadian with a bit of spare cash
take a liking to the potential.
Some Americans are already there but not
for economic reasons. They are part of the
MIA teams (Missing In Action) which are
looking for Americans captured or killed in
the Vietnam war. There is one small
economic benefit: the Americans pay about
$20 a day to any Laotians helping in the
digging of potential graves. Since that is far
more than the average wage for a day's
work, the government keeps three-quarters
of it and gives the rest to the worker.
With the current attitude of the
government and the people, don’t expect to
see ads in the paper promoting the beauties
of Laos. It is not going to happen soon and
most Laotians prefer it that way.
DEADLINE
FOR
CHRISTMAS
STORIES
THIS FRIDAY
Share your Christmas
memories with us
The
Short
of it
By Bonnie Gropp
Where’s the spirit?
Where is our Christmas spirit?
Just when I thought it was a failing in
myself of late, humankind has proven that
it's in the air. While I'll admit to a degree of
disgruntled attitude in my own personality,
over the course of this past few weeks, I
have seen and heard enough childish
pettiness to make me believe there is more
than one Grinch at work this season.
Last week for example a relative of mine
was told by a neighbour that they should
take down the flag (a Canadian one, I might
add) that was flying in their yard. "I'm sick
of it!" the neighbour boldly spat. You can
see her point of course. After all, she said,
it's been there since July and it's the first
thing she sees in the morning and the last
thing at night.
Honest. And this was only the curdled top
of what seemed to be one sour week.
Though I could regale you with other such
anecdotes, I really believe one is definitely
enough. Suffice it to say that there have
been enough of this ilk to have had me
contemplating the whereabouts of the
Christmas spirit.
I have always before taken great delight in
the way the festive season takes hold of our
personalities, softening up even the most
die-hard Scrooges. It's always seemed easier
to smile, easier to care. For a society too
often caught up in a "what's in it for me?"
attitude, the benevolence and generosity at
Christmas seems to be infectious. Though it
would be good to see it carried the year
through, it's always been nice to know that at
least once a year, the needs of others and
respect for them and their feelings is a
consideration of most.
Even with all its commercialization, the
goodwill and glad tidings of Christmas are
universal.
At least that's what I used to think, but this
year I was beginning to wonder. I knew that
personally, I was finding it more difficult to
get into the spirit of things, to forget me, me
me for awhile.
But then, as I listened to and enjoyed a
chuckle over the story of the neighbour, her
total selfishness (and folks I think we'll all
admit she's not alone; we've all had our
moments) reminded me that we can
occasionally be a little too self-absorbed.
In a world where a woman can not stand
to look out her window and see the Canadian
flag flying in the yard next door, there also
lives a woman watching her child die of
AIDS. In a world where one woman
complains about her husband's inability to
put his clothes in the hamper, used to live
another woman, who died this week during a
domestic dispute.
In a world where the successful complain
about paying higher taxes, live those who
pay none because they have nothing.
Part of being human is to feel for others
and ourselves. It wouldn't be natural to not
indulge in some moments of self-pity or
sanctimoniousness. I know there are days
when I am going to feel sorry for myself and
there's not a thing you can do about it.
But maybe, at least at this time of year, we
could stop and think for a while to see if it's
really important before we recriminate.
Perhaps we could try not to assume the
worst in others and respond to their
comments or actions, rather than react to
them.
Finally, let's think not of what is missing
in ovr lives, but in how blessed we are
compared to some, and in the true spirit of
Christmas give to them what we can, even if
it's only the warmth of a smile.